SLAY your College Essay
This is the moment! You’re applying to college and now you have to write the essay—the one that will get you into your dream school, or at least one that won’t make an admissions officer doze off. No pressure, right? Don’t worry—I got you. Let’s break this down into manageable (and slightly entertaining) steps so you can SLAY your college essay and impress those admissions officers.
Brainstorming Phase
Before you even think about writing, take a moment to reflect on your life. What makes you you? What are the experiences that have shaped you? Find a quiet space, avoid distractions (yes, put your phone on silent), and schedule time to dive deep into self-reflection. Think about pivotal moments, defining characteristics, and personal stories that make you unique. Colleges love self-aware students, so flex those introspective muscles!
Journaling & Writing
Get those thoughts out of your head and onto paper (or a Google Doc, if you’re fancy like that). Don’t worry about making it perfect—this is just the messy creative process. Carry a small notebook or use the notes app on your phone just in case inspiration strikes while you’re in line for coffee. The best ideas often come when you least expect them!
Adjectives & Descriptors
Time for some self-reflection. Write down at least 10 adjectives that describe you. Are you ambitious? Creative? Resilient? Pick a few of your favorites and think about how you can weave them into your essay. The key is authenticity, so don’t use big words just to sound smart. Admissions officers can smell fake enthusiasm from a mile away.
Personal Experiences
Think about your home life, hobbies, and extracurriculars. Did you grow up in a unique cultural environment? Have you overcome personal obstacles? Maybe you’ve been the glue holding your family together, or perhaps you spent every weekend perfecting your three-pointers. Whatever your story is, own it.
Community Experiences
How have you contributed to the world around you? Were you part of a volunteer group? Did you tutor younger students? Even if your contributions feel small, they matter. Colleges want students who will bring positive energy to their campus communities.
Leadership
Not all leadership looks the same. Sure, being student body president counts, but so does organizing a charity event, leading a debate team, or taking charge at your part-time job. If you’ve shown initiative and responsibility, talk about it!
Academic Success
Your GPA and test scores matter, but they’re not the whole story. Were you in Advanced Placement (AP) or International Baccalaureate (IB) courses? Did you push yourself academically? Maybe you struggled in a subject but worked hard to improve. Show colleges that you’re a dedicated learner.
Work & Responsibilities
If you’ve had a job, internship, or family obligations, highlight them. Working at a fast-food restaurant while balancing school? That’s responsibility. Helping raise your siblings? That’s leadership. Colleges value real-world experience just as much as extracurriculars.
Major Selection
Why do you want to study your chosen major? If you dream of being a doctor or making a difference in business, what sparked that interest? Be specific—admissions officers love a well-thought-out career path (even if it changes later).
Awards and Recognition
This is your time to shine! List all the awards, honors, and recognitions you’ve received. Whether it’s an academic award, a sports trophy, or a scholarship, highlight the hard work that got you there.
Adversity and Overcoming
If you’ve faced significant challenges, share your story. Maybe you’re a first-gen college student, have dealt with financial struggles, or overcame a personal hardship. Show resilience and growth, but keep it appropriate—don’t share anything that makes you uncomfortable.
University Selection
Why this school? Research the university and personalize your response. Talk about the programs, campus culture, and opportunities that excite you. (Bonus points if you’ve visited or spoken with current students!)
Final Thoughts
Your college essay is a chance to tell your story in a way that numbers and transcripts can’t. Be authentic, take your time, and remember—you got this!
Sarah Sanchez
USA College Coach, President/Founder
To view more college essay tips and insights, visit our free online College Essay Writing Guide here.
About the Author:
Sarah is the President & Founder of USA College Coach, specializing in admissions guidance, coaching for applications, essays, and short-answer questions.
With experience reviewing thousands of applications and essays for a Tier 1 university (ranked nationally and globally), Sarah has a keen eye for the qualities that top U.S. universities seek in students. She is passionate about helping students and their families create a strategic plan for success.
